Thursday, May 6, 2010

I am from ...........

I am from Latvia , Ukraine , and Israel .
I am from the hot sun in Israel , and the cool weather of both Latvia and Ukraine .
I am from grocery stores , parks , from small playgrounds , a small flower garden , and a small park zoo.
I am from delicious sushi , Potatoes with chicken , from a soup called borch , salads , and mini sandwiches .
I am from loud laughing and cheers , The whole family together .
I'm from Ira & Deda , Yasha & Sima , Fima & Alla , Ira & Valodya , And Sheva.
I am from Mama & Papa , and the sweet little Dasha , The loving , supporting , and giving family, The best family in the whole entire world.
I am from the warm water and beauty of Hawaii , the Beautiful and nice weathered Italy , The pool and the fun in turkey , and the view and warmness of Greece .
I am from surfing on the Internet , From Watching TV, Playing piano , Listening to music , and the last thing well it is kind of interesting is reading!
I am from leaving Israel , I am from my first day in Canada , and I'm from the days when i can come and hug my family.
I am from the family of Maliatski.
I am from living my interesting life!
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8 comments:

  1. LaurenMay 6, 2010 at 7:10 PM

    Very beautiful.

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  2. elMay 6, 2010 at 8:44 PM

    i like your detail

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  3. Queennicole12May 7, 2010 at 5:41 PM

    i love you i am from poem

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  4. juliaMay 7, 2010 at 7:39 PM

    I agree with everyone
    Nice details.

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  5. Mr.TMay 9, 2010 at 3:29 PM

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  6. Mr.TMay 9, 2010 at 3:30 PM

    Nice work Katrin. To an English speaker like myself, there is much poetry and beauty in the names that you included here. As you write future pieces, keep thinking about "Show Don't Tell" and "The Rule of Thoughts and Feelings". How, for example, could you show us the beauty of Hawaii instead of just telling us about it? What makes it beautiful? When you close you eyes and imagine it, what sensory experiences come to your memory? Is it particular images? Sounds? Smells? Textures? Focus next time on presenting some of these descriptions in your work.

    I can't wait to read your next piece!

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  7. aurelleMay 16, 2010 at 6:41 PM

    Good job! Mabey make the font a little bigger!

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  8. aurelleJune 6, 2010 at 1:24 PM

    Try to use thoughts and feelings.

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