If I’ am still alive I’ll tell you a story!
One early morning in October I was cleaning my dad’s garage after a mud hurricane. After a little I noticed a little Iron door in the floor. I put down my my wet mop and hurried to the little door. I kneeled down and saw that the lock on the door was broken and rusty. I thought. Maybe I should quickly peek inside. Maybe I should forget about the door. But I calmly took off the the rusty old lock and opened the door. I peeked inside. There was a long narrow tunnel. Then I heard a screeching sound. Just then a pack of rat’s scrurried on me. I wok up inside a dungeon. Then a man came in and killed me.
by Valentina
Friday, November 5, 2010
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scary really scary
ReplyDeletei don't get it, i thought you were alive, but you said you were killed
ReplyDeleteis it a dream?
ReplyDeleteAre you gonna post more?
ReplyDeleteAnonymous
Is a ghost telling the story.
ReplyDeleteGood story, maybe you might want to keep going and give a bit more detail
ReplyDeletecreepy.
ReplyDeletewas it a man the size of a rat that killed u?
Awesome iit is epic
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