Friday, November 5, 2010

Rat Attack

If I’ am still alive I’ll tell you a story!
One early morning in October I was cleaning my dad’s garage after a mud hurricane. After a little I noticed a little Iron door in the floor. I put down my my wet mop and hurried to the little door. I kneeled down and saw that the lock on the door was broken and rusty. I thought. Maybe I should quickly peek inside. Maybe I should forget about the door. But I calmly took off the the rusty old lock and opened the door. I peeked inside. There was a long narrow tunnel. Then I heard a screeching sound. Just then a pack of rat’s scrurried on me. I wok up inside a dungeon. Then a man came in and killed me.

by Valentina

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