Sunday, November 7, 2010

CANDY


candy is sweet also sour!
candy is soft 'n chewy too!
candies in a wrapper, bite size too!
candy is round, hard as well!
candy is long also short!
candy is fizzy even bitter!
candy is an oval, on a stick as well!
candies big, always small even colourful!
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8 comments:

  1. Amanda CooneyNovember 8, 2010 at 7:53 AM

    cool poem !!!
    candy

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  2. EstelNovember 15, 2010 at 1:47 PM

    I like candy too yum yum!!!

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  3. elNovember 15, 2010 at 1:49 PM

    i like your poem
    its like mine

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  4. hallieNovember 15, 2010 at 1:49 PM

    i like how u chose an interesting topic since it was wright after halloween!!!

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  5. LisaNovember 15, 2010 at 1:49 PM

    I like the title

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  6. AnonymousNovember 15, 2010 at 1:59 PM

    Are you made out of Candy? Just joking! Valentina

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  7. PaigeNovember 15, 2010 at 2:00 PM

    Cool. Maybe next time you could rhyme your poem into little couplets

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  8. AnonymousNovember 15, 2010 at 2:10 PM

    i love ur poem,because i love candies!!!XD









    FROM:KARL

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