Monday, November 8, 2010

Nester the Great

Nester layed down in a pile of clean clothes as he waited for Bryan to come home."Nester what are you doing there?" Bryan scooped up nester with a happy voice.Bryan raced up the stairs. He then took a left turn and down the hall. He slid his heavy backpack of his shoulder and on to the ground. He walked to the bed and layed nester down on the pillow. "Quess what? ". Bryan said in happy tone. "im doing a big project from Mr.Brunner and he said this project is 50% of are marks". "So he gave to everyone 3 red squares of fabric 2 elastic bands. Its due next monday so have 7 days to finish it"."What am i going to do with that?". I dont know . Nester thought.Im a stuff animal with the partner in crime, Giggles the gecko. Bryan then sat on the floor pulling of his socks of and tossing them into the white laudry hamper in the corner of his room. He then heard the thump of tiny foot prints coming closer to his room. then all the sudden .... Sunny came in wagging her tail with her pink tongue sticking out of her mouth. Dripping tiny drips of spit sliding down leaving spots of dark brown,wet spit on hid carpet. sunny is a shis tzu and a bunch of other mixes. Sunny then bolted into bryans lap tugging at the end of his jeans. the high score was at 3 days of goober, hole free pants. Bryan mom was'nt to pleased with that when she noticed torn pants and jeans coming back into the wash. Giggles the gecko was a crawling around iin his tank hopping to find some fresh food. hey go over into the pile of sticks their is some food there. Thanks, replied Giggles. If your wondering how a stuffed animal can talk to an alive animal its just part of this story you will have to find out yourself. "oh darn im la...." And before you know it Bryan was out of the room. A paper fell out of bryans backpack and into the air , Soft and slow it went down to the ground. Nester jumped of the bed and onto the floor. Nester heard the car starting , door slaming and the sound of the car in reverse. he then trotted over to the sheet of paper and took a look. On the crisp sheet stood 4 words. IDEAS FOR ART BROJECT. Nester nodded in knowing what that was. but what suprised him that it was blank! Hey nester. Giggles said. I have an idea.
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"Pass it!"Bryan yelled. he was playing soccer but his team was losing, 1/4 . The parents were doing there best to get us pumped but are team was Not pumped. Josh past it to Parker than finally to me. I kicked it in and out of legs and finally when i was ready i kicked it as hard as I could . it went soaring and woosh , right into the others teams net. The crowd of our team went wild! It was amazing how many people even some of the other teams cheerers cheered for them. The ref blew the whistled and are coach signaled to take 5. Everyone on my team patted me on the back on . Even Evan Motelen , he's not that nicest person.

To Be Continued......

Amanda Cooney

12 comments:

  1. lawf! (laugh at whats funny) I really like it

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  2. Cool story (so far)! Maybe you want to work on capatalizing your letters.

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  3. i love ur story
    i can't wait for it to be continued
    i like how u did "Show don't TEll" technique

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  5. haaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!! mr.brunner. i am curious to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!

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  6. Did Bryan love Nester so much that he was ready for anything? Valentina

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  7. maybe you should make it longer, before you say TBC.

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