The Hunters in the City
Once upon a time there was a girl named Sarah. She lived with her mom named Tamara and her dad named Steve. They lived in California because of the people who killed her Grandma and Grandpa. They had 2 dogs from her Grandma. . Sarah had a best friend named Steve. Sarah and Steve was in the same class Mrs. Shamrock. Sarah, Steve, and Sally always mad fun of Mrs. Shamrock. Steve and Sally came to Sarahs house and her house was on fire and she mom and dad was died and she saved her pets and she was at the hospital and asking everyone where her mom and dad is and they were not a the hospital so she went to Steve’s house and they were talking about Sarah staying there so they asked his Mom and dad if she can stay there and they said’’ Yes, you can”. She they went to Steve’s room to make room for Sarah and her pets and then she gets a phone call and Sarah said’’ Who is that I never say this phone number before would it be my Aunt because she never calls me’’. Sarah picks up the phone and she couldn’t say hello because she heard’’ You must go to Fraser street and then go to Madder Street’’. Then they hung up. Steve said’’ Don't go there’’.So she did and she got another phone call and they said'' Are you there yet?'' Sarah said'' Yes, now what?''
By Emily Andersen
TO BE CONTINED........
Monday, November 15, 2010
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i dont get it
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ReplyDeletecheck the spelling mistakes
example they mad fun of mr shamrock
OOOh... countinue its really interesting!!! Good job!
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