Friday, July 17, 2009

The Park



Yesterday I went to the park


With my friends


And it was boring.




It was very boring


Going to the park


Even with friends.
So me and my friends

Left the boring


Park.



And I learned the park is very boring, even with friends.

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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 17, 2009 at 1:27 PM

    nice poem

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  2. KatrinaJuly 17, 2009 at 1:49 PM

    I like your poem

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  3. Mr.TJuly 17, 2009 at 10:05 PM

    The way you spaced it out on the page really intensifies the feeling of boredom. A vast empty space with nothing there. I've had days like that.

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  4. LaurenJuly 19, 2009 at 9:19 PM

    Your poem is not good its great!

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  5. KathyJuly 20, 2009 at 1:05 PM

    Thanks.

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  6. MichelleJuly 24, 2009 at 10:03 AM

    Nice poem about a boring day at the park, Kathy.

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  7. KathyJuly 24, 2009 at 10:04 AM

    Thanks.
    Again.

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