Gerbils are disappearing?

It was burning hot. Beneath every big tree was crowded with children sweating and breathing heavily. Every time some one breathed out you could feel more stinky,humid wind drifting by you. It was air conditioned in the school, but we weren't allowed inside. I heard some one say"this is torture!!!". I agreed. I decided i don't care if i got in trouble. I headed inside. I went through the bathroom, across the hall, and went in my class. There i found the twins and Mr.T cleaning the gerbil cage for Stranger.(Stranger is a gerbil.)It was hard to put the struggling Stranger back into the cage. Stranger escaped. Luckily Mr. T caught him. After that Mr.T told us to head outside. we washed our hands and started to head out. I looked at Humy.(Another gerbil.) she stared at me. It looked like she wanted me to turn my head. I did. when I turned my head around again Hummy was eating a baby gerbil. I froze. My brain froze. Icouldn't think of anything. I could see dark red blood all over her face. Bones were all over the ground she stared at me with her beady black eyes. Paige ( one of twins ) turned her head as well. We both screamed and ran around the room. Mr. T said to stop but we couldn't hear him. Paige and I still
screaming ran across the hall, through the washroom and outside to the tallest tree. We were terrified. Amanda asked us what happened. At the end of our story, she said "Cool!" and ran inside.

By J.K.