Friday, July 17, 2009

Deep Blue Tritina

Sitting on the dock by the deep blue waters.
I saw A fish!
Swimming in the bay!
I wish i could swim in the bay.
I threw a rock in the deep blue waters.
Then again I saw the fish!
How I wish I was A fish.
To be swimming in the bay.
I wanna dive into the deep blue waters.
The bay is so deep the water is so fresh
and the fish is so pretty.

4 comments:

  1. Nice Tritina Laren, was this real also I liked the way you used verbs and adjectives.

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  2. i really like your tritina

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  3. Deep Blue Tritina is a wonderful title!

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  4. That was very thoughtful.
    Full of thought, I mean

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