Confusion

THE IS MY WRITING PROJECT FOR MR.T

The Test Subjects

In a lab far away from anyone, there was a giant explosion that burst the wall to rubble and out came four kids. They were being followed be heavily armed troops “TROOPS AIM AND FIRE!!!!” screamed the Commander. “Grace! I hope you have your shield up and ready!” yelled Mike “I’m all over it!” Grace yelled back. A small sphere was forming in her palms and it quickly became big enough to fit all of the kids. “There’s the cliff! Thomas get Steve up there for a clear shot! ” yelled Grace. “Alright! Steve ready for the ride of your life?” said Thomas. “Just get this over with!” said Steve. In no time Thomas was up in sky and carrying Steve while he was shooting lasers from his hands and bring troops down to the ground while blood was slowly spreading all over the ground. “it’s time to have some fun”said Mike has he slowly became invisible and troops started falling to the ground while the other troops became highly confused and then falling to the ground like the others. Grace was using her shield to knock the other troops down the cliff. “Thomas! Get down here ” yelled Grace. “I’m coming with Steve!” said Thomas. “We have to go now! Or else they will get even more powerful troops!” yelled Mike. They ran and ran till they couldn’t see the lab anymore. Weeks have passed after the fight. They realized that they didn’t need food if there was sunlight because they can use photosynthesis. One day Grace said “We need to go back and destroy the lab and the search parties looking for us.” “I agree.” said Thomas. “Me too” said Steve. “Well then let the fun begin.” said Mike. So went to the lab and they sneaked into the lab,once they were inside the generator room they started to disable the generator causing all systems in the lab to go down. “You two go to the generator room and check out what is wrong with the generator.” said the General. “SIR YES SIR!” yelled the privates. As they walked to the generator room they got tied up by the kids. They slowly made their way to the command center knocking out everyone in their path. They finally reached the command center and the general was expecting them. “Well well you finally come and you just fall into my trap, oh how easy.” said the General “So you want to fight?” asked Mike “Don’t even try that I have machines in here that stop you from using your powers and don’t even try to use your karate because well look at your feet.” answer the General. There were metal clamps that have clamp on their feet while they were talking. Fifty armed troops came out of the door and surrounded the kids. Then trapdoors under their feet opened and they when down a tube. They dropped into liquid nitrogen freezing tanks, the General came from a trapdoor, he quickly pressed the freeze button for all the tanks before they could do anything. “YOU ARE ONLY TEST SUBJECTS YOU WILL NEVER DEFEAT ME MMMUUUHHHAAAHHHHAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!” screamed the General. As the years passed the troops would go back and cover the lab with cement sealing it’s secrets forever. THE END “What do you think? Is my story good? Do you like it?” said Tom. “I think it needs something.” said Ron. “I’m gonna type it out tonight and give it some changes and tomorrow I will let u see it again.” said Tom. “Ok.” said Ron. THE NEXT DAY “Here you go I made two copies one i highlighted the changes and the other copy is not highlighted.” said Tom. “Let me see.” said Ron

The Test Subjects

In a lab far away from anyone, there was a giant explosion that burst the wall to rubble and out came four kids. They were being followed be heavily armed troops “TROOPS AIM AND FIRE!!!!” screamed the Commander. “Grace! I hope you have your shield up and ready!” yelled Mike “I’m all over it!” Grace yelled back. A small sphere was forming in her palms and it quickly became big enough to fit all of the kids. “There’s the cliff! Thomas get Steve up there for a clear shot! ” yelled Grace. “Alright! Steve ready for the ride of your life?” said Thomas. “Just get this over with!” said Steve. In no time Thomas was up in sky and carrying Steve while he was shooting lasers from his hands and bring troops down to the ground while blood was slowly spreading all over the ground. “it’s time to have some fun”said Mike has he slowly became invisible and troops started falling to the ground while the other troops became highly confused and then falling to the ground like the others. Grace was using her shield to knock the other troops down the cliff. “Thomas! Get down here ” yelled Grace. “I’m coming with Steve!” said Thomas. “We have to go now! Or else they will get even more powerful troops!” yelled Mike. They ran and ran till they couldn’t see the lab anymore. Weeks have passed after the fight. They realized that they didn’t need food if there was sunlight because they can use photosynthesis. One day Grace said “We need to go back and destroy the lab and the search parties looking for us.” “I agree.” said Thomas. “Me too” said Steve. “Well then let the fun begin.” said Mike. So went to the lab and they sneaked into the lab,once they were inside the generator room they started to disable the generator causing all systems in the lab to go down. “You two go to the generator room and check out what is wrong with the generator.” said the General. “SIR YES SIR!” yelled the privates. As they walked to the generator room they got tied up by the kids. They slowly made their way to the command center knocking out everyone in their path. They finally reached the command center and the general was expecting them. “Well well you finally come and you just fall into my trap, oh how easy.” said the General “So you want to fight?” asked Mike “Don’t even try that I have machines in here that stop you from using your powers and don’t even try to use your karate because well look at your feet.” answer the General. There were metal clamps that have clamp on their feet while they were talking. Fifty armed troops came out of the door and surrounded the kids. Then trapdoors under their feet opened and they when down a tube. But Grace didn’t fall. “I see powers that I can take from you.” said the General. The General has started to take her powers away and her life force as well so she was slowly leaving the world and then she dropped to the floor. They dropped into liquid nitrogen freezing tanks, the General came from a trapdoor. “What did you do to her!?!?!?!?”screamed Mike. “I killed her and took her powers.” said the General. Then he pressed the freeze button for all the tanks before they could do anything. “YOU ARE ONLY TEST SUBJECTS YOU WILL NEVER DEFEAT ME MMMUUUHHHAAAHHHHAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!” screamed the General. As the years passed the troops would go back and cover the lab with cement sealing it’s secrets forever. THE END “That is much better.” said Ron. “Thanks i got to go to class, bye.” said Tom. "I wish i could write like that." sighed Ron