Iam from nice houses and neiberhodes
I am from turky and mashed patatos
I am from my mom and dad
I am from from camp grounds in the summer
I am from the coolness of the ice
I am from the 4 of july and the nice days of the summer
I am from my faverite family
Good "I am from poem." Wade
ReplyDeletei Like it, hope you could write more!
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ReplyDeleteGreat start Wade! There are some ideas here that could really be built into something powerful. The next step would be to take each of the things that you mentioned, and expand on them. Give the "why" rather than just the "what". Think back to the discussions we've had around the idea of "Show Don't Tell" and "The Rule of Thoughts and Feelings". How can you use these strategies to create images and feelings in the minds of your readers?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work Wade!
nice job, wade but maybe you can improve by adding more detail.
ReplyDeleteGood job, mabey next time use more show don't tell
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