Saturday, November 6, 2010

The Lost Vampire

Gorry vampire bared her fangs, then swooped down leaving her victim dead on the floor. All her life she had been trained to kill, but one day she felt diffrent.She felt lonely now. She met a boy James that knew she was a vampire,but adored her anyway. But when her mother tried to say vamps were not real, and anyway they were vicious. Gorry was furious! She let out her anger on killing James' mom. Gorry was suddenly ashamed when James stared to curse at her. She stabbed herself and became a misrable ghost. Three years latershe saw James!!!!!!!!!!! he brought what he thoght was Gorry's parents. since he was a ghost too her 'parents' did'nt drink his blood. Her 'parents' were acctually people who hated her parents mrs and mr Jack frost. They both carefully placed them both into eating ectoplasm acid, the acid only let them free one night of the year... so every christmas year they hunt every single person who aided or admired ...Mr and mrs Claus!!!!!!!
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5 comments:

  1. it was short but it show a lot detail good stuff!

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  2. i like ur story nisha!
    it's short but really detailed and it intriqued me alot
    great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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